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Primeval drabble: A First (Kept verse)

February 25th, 2013 (08:50 pm)
pissed off

feeling: pissed off

Title: A First

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: Part of the Kept drabble verse. With thanks to lena7142.

Summary: Everything stopped.



-o-

Stephen swung hard. Too long he’d given Helen the benefit of the doubt. It’d cost him so much.

Too much.

He saw the glint of metal at her waist as she reached for it. But he was faster, snatching her gun before she had a chance.

Everything stopped.

Helen lay frozen on the ground, staring down her own gun’s barrel. Stephen wasn’t much of a fighter, but he was a crack shot; they both knew it.

Heart pounding, he felt giddy -- he wished he could have photographic evidence of this moment.

The first time he’d ever bested Helen Cutter.

Comments

Posted by: sophie_deangirl (sophie_deangirl)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 03:39 am (UTC)
Love it when he fights back

My fave moments with these drabbles are when Stephen bests Helen. There's a sense of triumph especially since he never got it on the show.

Fave part:

Heart pounding, he felt giddy -- he wished he could have photographic evidence of this moment.

The first time he’d ever bested Helen Cutter.

--sigh.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:40 am (UTC)
Re: Love it when he fights back
stephen cutter sit

I do love to see Stephen finally getting the upper hand. He deserves it!

Thanks!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 04:12 am (UTC)
primeval: abby

Yes, yes yes! Go Stephen, whoo-hoo!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:40 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Thanks :)

Posted by: freddiejoey (freddiejoey)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 04:28 am (UTC)
Stephen and coffee

YaY!!

*applauds wildly*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:41 am (UTC)
stephen happy

:)

Thanks!

Posted by: joshinator (joshinator)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 06:26 am (UTC)
Stephen Oh Yeah

*cheers and yells*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:41 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Thank you :)

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 08:19 am (UTC)
Blurred


OooooooooOoooooooooooooooOooooooooooooo!

Now what????

so glad Stephen's got the upper hand, but I just hope Helen doesn't pull one of her tricks... Keep focused, Stephen!


Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:42 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

LOL, after all this, I have to let these two really have it out. They have some things to say.

Thanks!

Posted by: fredbassett (fredbassett)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 11:37 am (UTC)
PriWriMo - Stephen - plot

Nice to see Stephen get teh better of her for once.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:43 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

It is a nice change of pace.

Thanks.

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 03:50 pm (UTC)
helenstephen

OMG! My heart is pounding too!

Great use of the prompt in your series.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:44 am (UTC)
stephen smiles

Thank you! Some weeks are easier than others.

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 04:10 pm (UTC)
worriedstephen

And about time, too! :-D

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:45 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

No kidding :)

Thanks!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 08:51 pm (UTC)

Yay for Stephen beating Helen. Now, get out of there, Stephen.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:46 am (UTC)
stephen wary

He's working on it. I'm afraid these two need closure though...one way or another.

Thanks.

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: February 26th, 2013 11:40 pm (UTC)
[primeval] abby maitland

Very exciting!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:47 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Thanks.

Posted by: judithjohn (judithjohn)
Posted at: February 27th, 2013 02:09 am (UTC)
Stephen

Wow! Nice one!!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:47 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

Thank you :)

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: February 27th, 2013 08:21 pm (UTC)
stephen

yey! Go Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:47 am (UTC)
stephen shocked

Thanks!

Posted by: 47eleven (47eleven)
Posted at: March 1st, 2013 02:25 am (UTC)
Stephen and Nick

Yipee Hee Yi Yo!!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:48 am (UTC)
stephen angsty

Thanks!

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: March 2nd, 2013 02:11 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Stephen

Good!! Now GET OUT OF THERE!!!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: March 5th, 2013 02:49 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

He's getting there...

Thanks :)

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