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Primeval drabble: Delayed Gratification

November 12th, 2012 (08:35 pm)
ditzy

feeling: ditzy

Title: Delayed Gratification

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: This next in my Kept drabble series.

Summary: Let’s save the fireworks for another day.



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Stephen laughed at Helen’s jokes, leaned into her touch. He ate the food, letting her caress his hair. When she looked him in the eyes, he looked back unflinchingly.

When she invited herself in, he didn’t decline. She pressed her lips against his, her hands running up his shirt, toying with the hem of his pants.

But as she drew closer, kissing him deeply, he pulled away, panting in her ear. “Not yet.”

“Oh, Stephen, don’t be shy,” she moaned, nipping his ear.

He closed his eyes, suppressing a shudder. “No,” he breathed. “Let’s save the fireworks for another day.”

Comments

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 07:33 am (UTC)
Pensive


A day called NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay for Stephen saying 'no' to her

*G* Should I remain nervous?

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

LOL, I figured you wouldn't be a fan of this one :)

Thanks!

Posted by: freddiejoey (freddiejoey)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 07:50 am (UTC)
Stephen - kerry

Oh, nice drabble!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
stephen skeptical

Thank you :)

Posted by: joshinator (joshinator)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 11:30 am (UTC)
Stephen

Stephen's one smart cookie

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

Let's hope so anyway. Thanks!

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 12:50 pm (UTC)
helenstephen

I agree with kristen_mara : a day called never! *shudders*

Edited at 2012-11-13 12:51 pm (UTC)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Let's hope he has a good plan...

Thanks!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 08:18 pm (UTC)

Very nice and I hope that day is never.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:02 am (UTC)
stephen smiles

I think most people agree with you. Thanks :)

Posted by: clea2011 (clea2011)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 09:44 pm (UTC)
Stephen beach colour

Ah, but will she let him get away with that? Let's hope so! Eeek!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:03 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

We will have to see. Thanks!

Posted by: 47eleven (47eleven)
Posted at: November 13th, 2012 10:44 pm (UTC)
Stephen

OOoooo! More intrigue!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:03 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

Indeed. Thanks!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: November 16th, 2012 02:54 am (UTC)
primeval: abby

Sounds like Stephen is playing her well. Thank God he hasn't given into the 'fireworks' yet. Great use of the prompt.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:03 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

I imagine he'd be a bit reticent on that front. Thanks :)

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: November 17th, 2012 04:45 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Stephen

Dangerous games!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 01:04 am (UTC)
stephen shocked

Very dangerous! Let's hope it works out for him this time.

Thanks :)

Posted by: Evil Insane Monkey (eviinsanemonkey)
Posted at: November 21st, 2012 12:24 am (UTC)

oh, nicely done.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 22nd, 2012 04:24 am (UTC)
stephen broken

Thanks :)

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: November 21st, 2012 12:53 am (UTC)
[primeval] profile stephen

Nicely done!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 22nd, 2012 04:24 am (UTC)
stephen and cutter

Thank you :)

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: November 26th, 2012 09:13 pm (UTC)
stephen

Uh oh! Be careful, Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: December 15th, 2012 01:32 pm (UTC)
stephen goodbye

You would hope he'd learn from his mistakes...

Thanks.

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