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Primeval drabble: Entrance (Kept verse)

April 15th, 2013 (09:01 pm)
pensive

feeling: pensive

Title: Entrance

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: Next in the Kept drabble verse. Also, I find myself in need of a beta for the art challenge on primeval_denial. If anyone is interested in beta'ing a longish AU fic, please, let me know!

Summary: It was a graceless, jarring entrance.



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It was a foreign yet familiar sensation. Briefly, Stephen thought to check on Helen. But the age of chivalry was dead, at least where Helen was concerned.

Besides, it was too late to go back. The adrenaline hummed in his veins; his breath caught painfully in his chest; the sensations reached their pinnacle.

He fumbled through.

It was a graceless, jarring entrance, and he hit the ground on all fours, a choked cry lodged in his throat.

Lifting his head, Stephen tried to get his bearings. But all he could see was Nick Cutter’s shocked face looking down at his.

Comments

Posted by: 47eleven (47eleven)
Posted at: April 16th, 2013 03:08 am (UTC)
Ferret

Nice drabble and great cliffhanger

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:19 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Thank you!

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: April 16th, 2013 08:25 am (UTC)
Blurred


*flailing* He's made it back to Nick!! Thank you!!


Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:20 am (UTC)
stephen breathing

Finally!

Let's see if his luck lasts.

Thank you!

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: April 16th, 2013 09:03 am (UTC)
stephen-nick-m25

Yay! Home! :-) Hope there's no sting in the tail...

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:20 am (UTC)
stephen sad

LOL, we shall see.

Thank you!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: April 16th, 2013 03:28 pm (UTC)
primeval: jenny

Yes! Finally!

And yeah, Helen is not worth any chivalrous behavior. :P

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:20 am (UTC)
stephen up

Definitely not.

Thank you!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: April 16th, 2013 09:01 pm (UTC)

Yay for Stephen making it home - at least, I hope it is home.

Nicely done.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:21 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Thank you!

Posted by: freddiejoey (freddiejoey)
Posted at: April 17th, 2013 09:38 am (UTC)

Wonderful!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:21 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Thank you so much!

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: April 20th, 2013 11:24 pm (UTC)
[primeval] abby maitland

Excellent drabble!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:21 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Thank you!

Posted by: goldarrow (goldarrow)
Posted at: April 21st, 2013 04:55 pm (UTC)

Yipes. Lovely cliffhanger!
And yippee for him dumping Helen!
Love these.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:22 am (UTC)
stephen and cutter

It's not the last cliffhanger I'm afraid...

Thank you!

Posted by: goldarrow (goldarrow)
Posted at: April 23rd, 2013 01:40 am (UTC)
PWM - Gator Threat Comment

Uh-oh. *looks over shoulder*

Actually, glad you're continuing with them!

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: April 27th, 2013 01:20 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Nick/Stephen (Team Mates)

Yay!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: May 6th, 2013 02:43 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Thanks :)

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: April 28th, 2013 02:52 pm (UTC)
stephen

Yey!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: May 6th, 2013 02:43 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

Thank you!

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