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Primeval drabble: Betrayal (kept verse)

January 21st, 2013 (08:24 pm)
grumpy

feeling: grumpy

Title: Betrayal

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: More in the Kept verse. With credit to lena7142.

Summary: You know, lying to people is no way to keep friends.



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The anomaly glittered invitingly, but Stephen was frozen.

“You know, lying to people is no way to keep friends,” Helen commented. “And you certainly could use more of those.”

Stephen’s chest constricted. “Is this your version of How to Win Friends and Influence People?”

“Just some friendly advice,” Helen said. “I mean, do you know how your friends here will feel when they find out? And do you really think Nick will welcome you back?”

Stephen tried to keep steady even as his cheeks flushed.

“He won’t,” she said, stalking closer. “Because you betrayed him. Just like you’ve betrayed me.

Comments

Posted by: judithjohn (judithjohn)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:40 am (UTC)
Stephen

Very nice tension!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:28 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Thanks :)

Posted by: Lena7142 (lena7142)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 03:32 am (UTC)
stephen

Oooh, nasty Helen, preying on Stephen's insecurities... :(

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:28 am (UTC)
stephen up

She is something else. Thanks as always :)

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 08:21 am (UTC)
Grand


Faye, don't you DARE!!

*G*

I shall pray that Stephen tells Helen he'd prefer to face Nick, regardless of what the reaction is, and takes a running jump home...

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:29 am (UTC)
stephen skeptical

LOL, you doubt me? After all this time?

Hee.

Wait and see.

Thanks!

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 09:07 am (UTC)
worriedstephen

*meeeeeeep* Don't listen to her, Stephen! *clings to edge of seat*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:29 am (UTC)
stephen shocked

This is all coming to a head some way or another...

Thanks!

Posted by: fredbassett (fredbassett)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 11:31 am (UTC)

Argh! Ignore the Cleaveage of Doom, Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:30 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Hopefully he'll have learned...

Thanks :)

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 01:28 pm (UTC)
helenstephen

Mean HELEN! Nick will welcome Stephen back. He has to!

Edited at 2013-01-22 01:28 pm (UTC)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:31 am (UTC)
stephen skeptical

Poor Stephen has to deal with her before even getting to Nick.

Thanks!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:56 pm (UTC)
primeval: abby

Aargh! Stephen, don't let Helen poison your mind!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:31 am (UTC)
stephen up

He is so prone to believing her sadly...

Thanks!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 08:25 pm (UTC)

Run! Stephen, run! Don't listen to the Cleavage of Doom.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:32 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

LOL wise advice for everyone :)

Thanks!

Posted by: clea2011 (clea2011)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 11:19 pm (UTC)
Stephen black white

Eeek! Run towards the light Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:32 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

This is one time when such advice is a good idea :)

Thanks!

Posted by: 47eleven (47eleven)
Posted at: January 23rd, 2013 02:19 am (UTC)
Stephen

Powerful!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:33 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Thanks!

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: January 24th, 2013 09:41 pm (UTC)
[primeval] anomalies

Uh oh, poor Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:33 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Hopefully he'll get out :) Thanks!

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: January 26th, 2013 03:09 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Helen/Stephen

Don't talk!! Run!!!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:34 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

If only he were that clear headed! Thanks :)

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: January 26th, 2013 07:43 pm (UTC)
stephen

Don't stand there listening to her, Stephen! Run, you idiot!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:34 am (UTC)
stephen up

He's not exactly at his best around her.

Thanks.

Posted by: freddiejoey (freddiejoey)
Posted at: January 27th, 2013 02:00 am (UTC)
Stephen - kerry

Very real this scene

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 29th, 2013 02:35 am (UTC)
stephen happy

Thank you :)

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