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Primeval drabble: Disappointment (Kept verse)

January 14th, 2013 (08:31 pm)
anxious

feeling: anxious

Title: Disappointment

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: Part of the Kept Drabble verse. With thanks to the exceedingly amazing lena7142.

Summary: This was what he’d worked for.



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Electricity crackled through the room as machines whirred. Then with a whoosh and a flare of light, an anomaly coalesced before him.

Moving around the console, Stephen made his way to the anomaly. As he approached, he hesitated, almost afraid to believe it was true.

But it was. This was what he’d worked for.

Then the door opened.

His first instinct was to run, but when he turned back, he froze.

Helen.

“Stephen” she tsked. “I know I’m not much of a role model in these matters, but your betrayal disappoints me.” She took a step forward, eyes narrowing. “Greatly.”

Comments

Posted by: joshinator (joshinator)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 02:43 am (UTC)
Stephen Oh Yeah

*starts to flail with panic*

Edited at 2013-01-15 02:43 am (UTC)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:25 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

LOL, and it's going to get worse...

Thanks!

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 07:56 am (UTC)
Stephen Clouds


*to the author and to Helen* "Don't you dare!"

Run, Stephen!! Run into the light before she does something!!



Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:26 am (UTC)
stephen broken

Aw, I wouldn't do all this and neglect a happy ending...would I?

Thanks!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 02:57 pm (UTC)
primeval: abby

Eep! And he was so close too.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:26 am (UTC)
stephen's eyes

I know! He has no luck.

Thanks!

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 04:07 pm (UTC)
helen

Nooo! Run, run, as fast as you can!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:27 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

He's always had problems running with Helen. Thanks!

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 05:53 pm (UTC)
worriedstephen

Noooooooo! Run, Stephen, yhou know it makes sense!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:27 am (UTC)
stephen angsty

Stephen rarely has sense with her...

Thanks!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 06:42 pm (UTC)

Run, Stephen. *paws crossed*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:28 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Thanks!

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 08:18 pm (UTC)
stephen

Eek! Run now, while you still can!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:28 am (UTC)
stephen smiles

He's always had the same issues with Helen. Thanks!

Posted by: clea2011 (clea2011)
Posted at: January 15th, 2013 10:37 pm (UTC)
Stephen black white

Oh no! And he was nearly out too!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:29 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

He could still get there if he can deal with her. Thanks!

Posted by: 47eleven (47eleven)
Posted at: January 16th, 2013 01:01 am (UTC)
Stephen

*holds breath*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:29 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

Thanks!

Posted by: freddiejoey (freddiejoey)
Posted at: January 16th, 2013 02:40 am (UTC)
Stephen and coffee

Very tense!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:30 am (UTC)
stephen happy

Thanks!

Posted by: Lena7142 (lena7142)
Posted at: January 16th, 2013 04:54 am (UTC)
stephen

I love how ominous Helen's arrival in this is. Gave me shivers! Run for your life, Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:30 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Ugh, Helen. She is a piece of work. Thanks!

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: January 17th, 2013 09:19 pm (UTC)
[primeval] trio

Uh oh!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:30 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Thanks!

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: January 20th, 2013 03:01 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Helen/Stephen

Meep!

Time for a flying leap through the anomaly!!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: January 22nd, 2013 02:31 am (UTC)
stephen shocked

LOL that would be the smart thing. Thanks!

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