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Primeval drabble: Winning (Kept verse)

September 11th, 2012 (08:55 am)
moody

feeling: moody

Title: Winning

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval.

A/N: Yeah, so writing plot 100 words at a time is slow. I apologize that this is so boring. Previous drabbles are here.

Summary: Stephen wants to win; Helen thinks he needs to adjust his priorities.



-o-

Helen showed him the research; showed him the facility and staff. She took him to a more comfortable room and said, “This is the recovery ward. I’m told you’re ready for it. Medically.”

Stephen looked around sceptically. It was still too bright with staff milling about, but there were personal touches, thick blankets, comfortable pillows, pictures on the walls.

“Emotionally, I’m less convinced,” Helen continued. “You’re still trying to fight me; to win.”

Stephen ground his teeth together, but didn’t deny it.

“Winning is my concern,” she said, low and provocative. “For you, it’s just a question of staying alive.”

Comments

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 02:15 pm (UTC)
helenstephen

You make me hate HELEN! even more (and I love it! *g*)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:19 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

It is hard to hate Helen more. Though I'm not sure that's a feat I should be proud of!

Thanks :)

Posted by: fredbassett (fredbassett)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 05:18 pm (UTC)
PriWriMo - Helen

This doesn't bode well!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:23 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Indeed. Stephen has a long ways to go, sadly.

Thanks!

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 06:31 pm (UTC)
worriedstephen

Don't worry, Helen, he's definitely staying alive - just not for you :-)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:25 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Heh, pretty much. Stephen's going to start his plotting again soon here.

Thanks :)

Posted by: clea2011 (clea2011)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 07:17 pm (UTC)
Helen comments

Ooh, Evil Helen!

(I don't know why you think this is boring, it really isn't.)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:26 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

Very evil!

(And LOL, I tend to worry a lot. And it's just so hard to move plot along with 100 words!!)

Thanks :)

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 07:52 pm (UTC)

Eek! Ebil Helen is being Evil!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:26 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

Helen. Ugh.

Thanks :)

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 07:55 pm (UTC)
helen

Helen is definitely scary.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:27 am (UTC)
stephen smiles

She really is.

Thanks :)

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: September 11th, 2012 11:26 pm (UTC)
James and Cat


Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek at the last line!

I'm just glad that Stephen is definitely cured of his Helen illusions in this AU ;)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:28 am (UTC)
stephen hair

Oh yes. Stephen is pretty well ready to be done with Helen entirely in this AU :) Let's just hope he can get away!

Thanks!

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: September 12th, 2012 03:49 am (UTC)
primeval: stephen

I loathe Helen even more with every new drabble you write in this 'verse.

Edited at 2012-09-12 03:50 am (UTC)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:31 am (UTC)
stephen's eyes

LOL, she is pretty despicable.

Thanks :)

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: September 15th, 2012 07:24 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Helen/Stephen

Maybe some allies though! *she says hopefully*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: September 17th, 2012 03:32 am (UTC)
stephen cutter sit

Things look bleak, but Stephen is resourceful. So there's hope for him yet :)

Thanks!

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: September 25th, 2012 10:46 pm (UTC)
[primeval] blue background stephen

Eeek!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: October 1st, 2012 12:40 pm (UTC)
stephen sad

:)

Thanks!s

Posted by: Evil Insane Monkey (eviinsanemonkey)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 10:46 pm (UTC)
PE: Danny Quinn

eep

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 22nd, 2012 04:33 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

:)

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