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Primeval drabble: Blossoming

August 13th, 2012 (10:05 pm)
distressed

feeling: distressed

Title: Blossoming

Disclaimer: I do not own Primeval

A/N: Another in my apparent drabble series. At least I plotted so there is an end in sight for all this. But with 100 word snippets, it’ll take me a while to get there!

Summary: Faster, stronger, higher – still not enough.

-o-

“You impress me, Stephen,” Helen said. “You were never the brightest but so dedicated. To think, you’ve blossomed. I underestimated how my disappearance would motivate you.”

Stephen stood, taut. “It’s not like that.”

“Still not the smartest, sadly.” Helen shrugged, moving forward. “Never matter.”

Stephen rebelled, lashing out desperately. He lunged, knocking into her before his strength vanished and his legs folded, the world tilting.

“Faster, stronger, higher – still not enough,” she cooed above him, holding up the syringe he hadn’t seen. She smiled coldly as the world went horribly dim while the drugs took effect. “We’ll work on that.”

Comments

Posted by: clea2011 (clea2011)
Posted at: August 14th, 2012 07:20 am (UTC)
Stephengreen

Eeek! Run away Stephen! Except you can't. Liking this Drabble series a lot! :-)

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:55 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

I'm glad you're liking it! I worry that it's all too slow, but there's only so much I can do in 100 words!

Thanks!

Posted by: lukadreaming (lukadreaming)
Posted at: August 14th, 2012 09:05 am (UTC)
Helen and Stephen

*Boos loudly for HELEN! nastiness*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:55 am (UTC)
stephen up

She really is a piece of work. But really sort of fascinating to write.

Thanks!

Posted by: nietie (nietie)
Posted at: August 14th, 2012 01:33 pm (UTC)
helenstephen

Eeeek! HELEN! I hate her!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:55 am (UTC)
stephen hair

She really is a rather unlikable woman.

Thanks :)

Posted by: reggietate (reggietate)
Posted at: August 14th, 2012 03:49 pm (UTC)
stephen-nick-m25

*meep* Someone needs to be rescuing him naow, pls! ;-) This continues to be fascinating.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:56 am (UTC)
stephen's eyes

I don't plan on leaving Stephen there forever...it may take a while though!

Thanks :)

Posted by: she was a work in progress. (dreamer_98)
Posted at: August 14th, 2012 11:56 pm (UTC)
primeval: abby

ARGH, Helen is so sadistic here.

Great continuation!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:56 am (UTC)
stephen happy

She's sort of fun to write that way.

Thanks!

Posted by: knitekat (knitekat)
Posted at: August 15th, 2012 07:43 pm (UTC)

Eek! Run Stephen.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:57 am (UTC)
stephen smiles

He definitely needs to do SOMETHING.

Thanks :)

Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: August 15th, 2012 11:12 pm (UTC)
[primeval] armed stephen and abby

Eeek!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:57 am (UTC)
stephen happy

Indeed! Thanks :)

Posted by: fredbassett (fredbassett)
Posted at: August 16th, 2012 08:08 pm (UTC)
PriWriMo - Helen

Oh how very Helen!!

Scary.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 17th, 2012 11:57 am (UTC)
stephen skeptical

She is rather unsettling.

Thank you :)

Posted by: kristen_mara (kristen_mara)
Posted at: August 18th, 2012 12:26 pm (UTC)
Whisper


Meep - flails

*dives into screen to rescue Stephen*

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 29th, 2012 03:10 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

He could really use the rescue, poor guy.

Thanks!

Posted by: lsellersfic (lsellersfic)
Posted at: August 19th, 2012 03:52 pm (UTC)
Primeval:Helen/Stephen

Meep!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 29th, 2012 03:10 am (UTC)
stephen goodbye

Definitely!

Posted by: athene (deinonychus_1)
Posted at: August 21st, 2012 07:13 pm (UTC)
stephen

eeeek! This doesn't look good for Stephen at all.

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: August 29th, 2012 03:10 am (UTC)
stephen cutter

He's definitely had better days.

Thanks ;)

Posted by: Evil Insane Monkey (eviinsanemonkey)
Posted at: November 20th, 2012 10:41 pm (UTC)
PE: Danny Quinn

oh poor Stephen!

Posted by: do i dare or do i dare? (faye_dartmouth)
Posted at: November 22nd, 2012 04:37 am (UTC)
stephen cutter distance

I am rather mean to him.

Thanks :)

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